Tuesday 19 March 2019
introducing my self
My name is kingston and i am a year 7 the school that i went to last year is te hapara school and this year i am in lh8 in base gaddum and something i did in the holidays was staying home and playing on my ps4.
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Positive - something done well
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Hi Kingston I think you did very well with your writing,
ReplyDeletebut you could have more capital letters in your sentence and try to make it make more sentence it was very good.